Not bad if this is your first song. It sounds a lot like my first song!
Ehh, i cant resist it.
Hmmm is not bad song it liked!
I liked the percussion, but it could have been louder and more defined. i felt like the resolves weren't as fleshed out as they could have been, and the background chords were much to quiet to add the emotion this song needs. it's an OK song, but you could still work on this much more. Obviously this isn't the full song, but the sections still should have been complete by the 1 minute mark, and they weren't. Keep working on it and it could turn into something really great.
Thanks! The full song was actually already put up a while ago! You can check it out on my profile!
This is very unique and effective, but it simply needs more. It sounds like your ostinato is played by a square pluck that dissipates into a violent saw, this a very clever idea, wish I thought of it. It builds quite nicely, but when it got to its peak it didn't sound finished, so I was waiting for the drop; not realising that it actually already was the drop.
Still, very effective!
Thanks! You've been quite a helper with these songs reviews, so I took your advice and made a new song coming later this week called Deep-Space Pirates!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.