Not bad if this is your first song. It sounds a lot like my first song!
Ehh, i cant resist it.
Hmmm is not bad song it liked!
I liked the percussion, but it could have been louder and more defined. i felt like the resolves weren't as fleshed out as they could have been, and the background chords were much to quiet to add the emotion this song needs. it's an OK song, but you could still work on this much more. Obviously this isn't the full song, but the sections still should have been complete by the 1 minute mark, and they weren't. Keep working on it and it could turn into something really great.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.