=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===
You've got a nice start to a song here. I used to really dig the arpeggiated intros like you've done a while back when I was composing. The biggest problem with this track, unfortunately, is that it's just *way* too repetitive. You pretty much repeat the same idea throughout the entire song! With a little more variation, this song could be much better, though I think that the composition needs a bit of work as well.
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Overall (this is not an average): 5/10