I will be one of the judges determining your enry into the NGAUC!!!
Personally I had to say that I really enjoyed your song! You have a really good feel for form and transitions! I really enjoyed your chord progression as well. It appeals to my sense of non conformituous chords taht you dont hear in everyday music. I LOVED IT. That being said, i would've loved to hear a bit more variety in what you wrote. It sounds like you found one thing that sounded cool and stuck with it the whole song. Thats not neccesarilly a bad thing for this genre though.
Youre transitions were great and clean and the whole song flowed really well, I would love to see how you improve in the future.
Youre sound design (i.e. the sounds you used) sounded very preset based. It sounds like you wrote some chords on a preset sound that you liked and went with it. This does not mean you are a bad composer, I just would love to see if you knew more about making just the right sounds you wanted for your songs, and then USED those soundsin amazing way.
Good luck on the competition and well done!!!!
You're not allowed to sell this or share anywhere else until after the contest....sigh...oh well. This is a good piece. I feel the bass synth plucks could have something more behind them though, and this song is a bit repetitive, not bad though, but I feel the bass synth could blend a little more also in some parts. Good job though. I feel this could use a little more but not bad.
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