=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===
Huh, this is a really interesting piece. I was expecting stock orchestral from the first couple of notes, but what I got was anything but that. In terms of arrangement, I really have to commend your very unique approach to an orchestral piece! My problem with this piece, however, is that the energy level stays flat pretty much throughout this piece, and there is no particularly strong melody that stood out to me. Work on those, and I bet this piece will be really cool!
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Overall (this is not an average): 6/10
Hey John, thanks for the review! I'll work on this again once I start wrapping up the soundtrack for Tenera. While the second half of the song really illustrates what I wanted it to, I can see what you mean in the first section and will do what I can to improve that.
I like this. Good luck in the contest.
I may take this and use it as a set piece later.
I'll pm you bro
Alright, thanks! Just let me know c: