I like the atmosphere and instruments. The beat is creative, and this piece has a great dreamy vibe to it. It’s slow to progress, but I enjoyed the radio effects at :53. The melodies at 1:03 were enjoyable, yet they don’t have a ton of shape to them, and seem a little too jumpy (as opposed to stepwise). I enjoyed the structural relief you offered at 2:16. The pace is very slow, however, and you did little to vary the melody. The modulation at 3:40 helped create a sense of climax, yet I still think this was a very safe piece overall. I think you should’ve put more effort into melodic development here, especially later in the piece. The whole thing is very drawn out and languid, and does little to keep me engaged after a while. You could’ve brought out a lot more emotion in this piece. The atmosphere is simply not sufficient to sustain my interest, especially since large swaths of the piece were rather minimalistic. The mixing and mastering are very solid, but compositionally I think you need to work more on creating emotional heights. The one modulation at 3:40 came across as a pretty lazy alternative to building off of your earlier melodies. Solid work in general. Keep at it, man. ;)
I like the closing part, sounded a lot like PSO nostalgia.