Very nice but I was listeining and...
I heard the notes in the music and during the chorus one of your keys is off and makes it sounds weird. the note im talking about comes in at 42 to 45 second mark. There needs to be another note there instead of that one. this is an awesome start and the beat is solid! if you want anymnore suggestions just email me at scnabu@comcast.net maybe i can even help you with it if you allow me to =)