It took a couple of listens, but I'm starting to get into this! I've never really been the biggest fan of music in the jazz category, as usually puts me to sleep, but I can appreciate the funk part at least.
I don't hear the clashing issue that Blue heard, but I feel like there should have been a little more variety, even with it being a loop, either with changing the progression or writing something connecting to the beginning to make it loop better to hook you into the track. I dunno.
I like that bass line though. I always like hearing moving, complimentary, bass lines, being a bass player myself.
Other than those things, I'm kind of neutral with this track, which makes it hard to review for me. There's not much along the lines of me disliking anything, and same thing with liking anything. Nothing really caught me off guard or came out to me as really interesting, for lack of a better explanation.
This is good, though. As I said, it took a couple listens, but I was starting to get into it. I just can't find anything to really review about it, y'know?
Agreed, I probably should've changed the harmony a bit in the 2nd repeats.
The melody evolved but not so much the harmony.
Thanks for your ears and an honest review! :D
Forgive me if I mess up since I know nothing about this genre (except for Pounce which was a cross between this genre and glitch hop).
The song ended a weird note, with the way this was constructed you could've liked 10 seconds as it went into a silence. At times the instruments clashed too much such as 0:50 - 0:58, but it makes the track feel more full so there's not much to criticize on that. Other than that the song was pretty good. Keep doing what you're doing.
Yeah, I may have gone crazy on the clav, lol. It was suppose to loop, can't figure that out yet >_<
Thanks for listening!