=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===
Yo! This track is really cool! I don't think I've ever really heard anything quite like it. I have to say, the mix is really good! I really like the quieter sections. 1:39 onwards through 2:00 is a standout. You do atmosphere really well. The singing has a great tone, but a few notes fall flat - be careful. Your sound design is also awesome! What is not awesome about this song is that it doesn't actually sound like a *song* - it sounds like a bunch of separate ideas that don't really fit together so well. It needs more progression and better transitions.
This one was extra hard to score! It's a bit of a mess, but it shows a lot of promise. Keep it up!
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Overall (this is not an average): 7/10
Thanks! I'll be sure to work on my cons n keep the pros living alive! I'm new but still learning so it's greatly appreciated!
Bro can I get that Snare sample brooooooo
I can take off the rest of the track and make you just the snares if ya want mate