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Author Comments

f-i-n-a-l-l-y a new song

the last day of school for me is next wednesday, so more music should be coming soon. i've been busy with projects for finals, so i haven't been very active lately

anyway i hope you enjoy this, i mostly had to make it with earbuds because there are sores behind my ears from wearing headphones, so the volume balance is a little off but i hope it's still ok

Reviews


=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===

First of all, I love that intro chord progression on the piano. Second, although I'm not totally sold on the drop which follows immediately after, I do actually like the chord progression a lot. So I guess you make good chord progressions! The melodic section that starts at 1:00 unfortunately falls into the trap of melodies that feel somewhat random, and then we suddenly go into this orchestral thing at 1:25?? Man, this song has so many crazy different sections. The impressive thing is that you actually transition between them fairly well. The section at 2:10 with the chords is actually awesome. I wish you had stayed on that section for longer (or just repeated it somewhere else in the song) rather than transitioning wildly away from it again. All in all, I think this song is cool and you're a good songwriter, but you need to learn which parts of your song are the best and repeat them a little more rather than transitioning between 100 different parts!

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Mixing: 3+/4
Arrangement: 3/4
Composition: 3/4
Overall (this is not an average): 7/10


littlelamp100 responds:

i agree, thank you for taking the time to write this review and i will take this into consideration in the future :)


this is actually pretty good! i still have a couple of complaints.
For the drop, turn the sub up a bit and the kicks down a bit
For the part after drop 1, a better synth could be used and it could be louder, since that's the only true melodic part of the song
Overall - around an 8/10
Nice Job!


littlelamp100 responds:

thanks for the feedback :)


Wow.. this is awesome, im yer fan now :D
what do you use to make the magic happen (what software do you use :v)


littlelamp100 responds:

i use fl studio. thanks for the follow :D


Neat! Last day for me is also Wednesday ;O


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Credits & Info


Listens
874
Downloads
50
Votes
4
Score
4.74 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 12, 2016
12:27 PM EDT
Genre
Dubstep
File Info
Song
6.5 MB
2 min 50 sec
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