=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===
It's kind of funny to me that you've classified this as Dance. In my mind, this sort of heady and thoughtful music is about as far away from Dance as I could imagine. (Don't worry, I don't dock points because of incorrect genre specifications!) I enjoy this song, however. I mean, it takes a long time to get into the good stuff, and it makes me wonder if the intro is *really* worth it, but that's a small criticism. Once we hit 1:00, we get into this really interesting, pad-dominated, ambient section. There are even nice melodies on top of it, what more could I ask for? I'll tell you what I could ask for: a better beat. if the drums in this song were closer to hip hop drums - like heavier, maybe a little distorted - I think it could be a really awesome ambient piece. I still like it for what it is, though!
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Overall (this is not an average): 7.5/10