Room for improvement.
Let me start out by saying that the composition itself is excellent. I'm still trying to get to this level of writing. Without a keyboard, that's difficult. Anyway, excellent writing/composing. I love it.
Now I'm going to move on to how it sounds otherwise. If it wasn't for the epicness of the composing, I would have rated much lower, as this would have been difficult to listen to. Though your choice of instruments and panning was great, the amount of reverb makes you sound like a Duran Duran fanboy; it's way too much. A little EQ would have helped as well. Currently it sounds like it's being played through a sock. Bass is cool, but having it dominate the air makes it come through all muddy.
I hope my review helps.
Aha!! Thanks buddy! I'll keep them in mind! :-)