needs more
I couldn't tell at first if your drum work was horrible, or if the samples were simply annoying. I think just a little bit of both. Try working on that by getting some more drum samples and working on new, creative beats. The music was too simple. You only had one instrumeent at a time which usually shows no skill, but i think it has potential so keep at it. Once you get that down, get better with your effects and mastering your tracks.