I would have liked to hear a bit more than piano. Also, there's a lot of clipping in this. Something you could also do is add a lot more bass during the drop. There's not really a lot of bass throughout the song, and it would make the drop feel more energetic.
Yeah ik this remix sucks xd I actually deleted it from sc so I could work on it more lol
Overall, I found this pretty enjoyable, but I feel it could use a section with a little more energy. The progression of the track is nice, and all of the melodic content feels right. The clipping is SUPER annoying though. Either you have effects going on after your limiter (such as an EQ), or there's a plugin that's trimming the peaks at 0db. Keep up the good work.
That little scratchy sound? That's what's known as CLIPPING. Getting your songs mastered will fix that instantly. You should know this already. Clipping ruins your chances of getting into labels, winning contests, and it's also extremely grating. Whatever, you know it now.
Aside from that, this is pretty good. It stays true to the original and overall feels nice. Sound design is very good too! Just master your songs next time, or at the very least put a limiter on them. Either one will get rid of the clipping.
I tried a limiter. I think it's the EQ. Frequency is too high or something D:
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