Not my jam. I disliked that i had to turn it up so's i could hear the mumbly background canon. Glad you came out of the rough point though.
Thank you for listening man. I understand that I still need continue working on vocals as well as mixing mastering to make better songs. I'm just an amateur so you know how it goes. I also get that the subject matter of the song is a little gloomier than most would like to admit but I understand your aversion to it. Thank you for your criticism and listening.