This wasn't too bad but what I didn't really get most of it is the starting point. You had something going there and it started to vanish when you raised that cutoff towards 0:07. See you seem to have a fair understanding of lead concepts but you'll need work on your rhythms which with enough time and effort will get you places. You work on those rhythms and bass-lines and you could have something really neat. Also since you pretty new try to steer away of effects for the moment like cutoffs and flanges what not. Learn the basics with what you got first and once you have the clear picture start tinkering with effects but try them out with maybe a sample. For example making a loop including a simple lead and rhythm. Then go on with the bass-line and see where you go. Steer away from the loud and deep bass sounds for now and work on those main parts first. Try it out :)
Thanks, I'll make certain to try a more progressive development style :D I do get quite a bit ahead of myself sometimes XD
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