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Jovds - Pirate-ish

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Author Comments

~Wannabe DubStep Pirate~
hope you like
hope you dont mind that its 3 months late
Tell me please anything I could do to improve my skillz
The second drop is a complete garbage


=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===

PirateStep, huh? That is definitely a new one. I'm not really a huge fan of the melodies in this piece, but I have to say that the drop itself is not bad! It's definitely better than a lot of the drops that I've heard here. (I'm actually not so much convinced by the second drop as I was by the first; I think the first was better!) Still, not a bad song here. I think with a more hooky main melody and a bit more work on the drop, this could be pretty neat. It's already a bit original!

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Mixing: 3/4
Arrangement: 3/4
Composition: 2+/4
Overall (this is not an average): 6/10

Overall this isnt bad, but there's a lot of things that feel like they need work.
Composition wise, I feel you did pretty well. The melody/progressions sound not only properly in key, but both are reasonably enjoyable.
The drums seem kinda weird. The kick feels like it's lacking something, and the snare feels completely off. (It might be labeled as a snare, but it certainly doesn't sound like one.)

jovds responds:

After uploading it, I felt the same about the keys
I don't know what is lacking in the kick
and the snare, the snare, I don't know I kinda like it the way it is.
But still, I'll make everything possible to improve future works
Thanks for the review

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3.00 / 5.00

Jun 6, 2016
7:40 PM EDT
File Info
5 MB
2 min 13 sec

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