I like the pensive mood and atmosphere at the beginning. Has a very spacious and intellectual quality. The bass that comes in at :28 doesn’t always sound very distinct. The mixing might need a bit of cleaning up there, and the reverb on the piano might be distorting it a bit too. I’d encourage you to be a little stricter with the equalization. The piece is a little slow to progress, and seems to be headed in a very different direction starting at around 1:25. I like the dark mood at around the 2-minute mark. I think you need to offer the listener some more melodic content early on, though. The repetitive piano riffs don’t quite cut it. This piece has a ton of potential, with a killer mood and atmosphere and some really neat sound design. I wanted to see you resolve some of the tension in the piece at some point, though. There needed to be some melody or emotional height to hit this piece home. It’s also rather long considering how little variety there is among the moving notes here, and it doesn’t feel very conclusive by the end. The composition really should be your main focus going forward. Other than that, cool piece. Keep at it, Nedwin04! :)
This gave me undertale vibes, the reverby instrument i have no clue what it is.
Damn! Very Cool and Spooky!
Thank you very much my friend. I originally wrote it without many of the sound effects and it just didn't work. Once I added them, BOOM, it just fitted perfectly to what the developer wanted.