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Blossom (Full Original Mix)

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Yey,finally i've done the wip i uploaded before here on Newgrounds! I'm pretty satisfied with the results,but constructive criticism are very appreciated! Hope you like it <3
Download free here:
http://pumpyoursound.com/fangate/detail/4078-blossom-free-download
Plugins used: Sylenth1,Sytrus,Directwave(sampler),Maximus,BIGKIXDIPPA and many more
Mastered with Masterlizer.com

Again ,check out my Bandcamp: https://wick3dr.bandcamp.com/

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That noise riser pretty loud and high pitched, it actually hurt my ears when using headphones. Also that synth starting at 0:15 is quite bare, and doesn't fit with rest of the instruments that well. And, eh, Fl-keys just don't make it :P

But the other instruments were pretty good, especially the supersaw (though you ant go wrong with supersaws).

And i assume that Masterlizer's mastering works, because it sounded pretty great.

Melodies are quite catchy, but really typical for house / edm. At first I could've sworn that i had heard the exact same melody before. Also there were some parts where the melodies sounded a bit off-key, especially at 2:41 and 3:00 - 3:33.

What can I say, It's pretty basic house stuff. But it lacks certain creativity and the unique twist that would turn this song into a "Wow!"- able, or so to say.


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Wick3dRabbit responds:

Sorry for the riser,i made this with my headphones at 38-40% volume :P In fact,the synth you hear at 0:15 is the bass (lol maybe because the sliding feel) i used in the later parts of my song. And yea i know,FL keys is stupid,but i tweaked it a lot(but it still sounds stupid),so next time i'll use a soundfont instead.

Well,after you sworn with me that you've heard this melody before,i can swear that i got this melody myself,and it wasn't inspired by any other songs(also the melody in my last song was too simple so i tried to think of a better one,but it turned out being so typical and generic.Sorry.)

Continuing the talk about melodies; i can say that the off-key sounding at 2:41 and 3:00 - 3:33 are intended, to make it less repetitive but then again it went wrong(horribly).

Since this is just my 2nd take at this kind of music,i know i don't have the needed skills and experience to make a great song that can make people say "Wow!";but again,i'll try my best to improve my skills in my later songs,and someday i'll definitely make people say "wow!" xD

Sorry for late reply,and thanks for the criticism :)

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475
Votes
2
Score
4.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 4, 2016
9:38 AM EDT
Genre
House
File Info
Song
10.1 MB
4 min 25 sec
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