Sounds quite odd, not really my taste.
The "sounds" were really random, and the drums just did not seem in the right place.
The end was also sudden.
Maybe next time you could add a nice beat, and organize the drums?
Listen to the slower version I posted before this one. I didn't change anything in this version other than the tempo. http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/686478
A bit screechy for my tastes, but other than that, this a great piece.
Would use for game if I created games.
The screeching was some mastering issue I had. Sorry about that, but I'm glad you like it!