A very quiet mix, even at the "full" parts. Lots to be desired in terms of volume leveling. Plus a lot of stuff sounds off in terms of timing. Good composition, but you've got a lot of room for improvement.
I see what you mean. As for the timing issues, part of that is just effects. I tried lowering the level a little bit so you could hear it more. As for the volume, I did a lot of automation, and i guess I didn't check everything.
Thanks for your response though. I was working on a v3 so I could just improve on that edit.