Sounds great to me except the part at 0:51 it is a little to high pitched and does hurt my ears a little. I like the part a lot other than it needs to come down a tad in pitch so it isn't quite as harsh. Could be longer for sure. If this were extended you would probably need more variation to compensate or it would be to repetitious.
The intro sample is too loud, the lead starting around 0:51 is pretty cheesy (and it hurts my ears), the song is quite repetitive somehow, and it's too short... because I WANT MORE! The ambiance that you've got going on is so cool. It's inspiring to listen to the chords evolving, while the drums and the bass don't seem to be bothered by the behaviour of the chords, while minding their own business. This contrast works really well, and creates a soundscape I could listen to for days.
I feel like me being a videogame drum and bass producer too (occasionally), who tries to create such soundscapes, makes me go crazy a bit here :P. I'm glad I came a long this song.
Thank you for writing such a detailed review! I'll make sure to watch my volume on the samples, but I appreciate your love for the style I was going for. Thanks again for the constructive feedback!
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