This is actually pretty damn cool; I really love that arpeggio. Everything seems to flow really nicely as well. Only really complaint is the Hi-hats are really loud, and the little random sounds are a nice touch, but need some EQing or effects.
Other than that, I can see a lot of improvement from your previous stuff. All I can say is keep learning and trying new shit.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.