Really nice
Now this was something really nice. A good vibe I got from this and some interesting sounds you brought forward with this one. I like your style and I do think the ending had some of the best of sound from this a good quality piece if you ask me very nice job indeed hope to see more like this
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Honestly you have it down but if anything needs changing make the whole piece like you have the ending very good stuff there
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