Hmm, there are definately improvements from the first.
BlackPlastic already said that it was somewhat repetative, as an ambient track it serves it's purpose well, and if I recall remember this song originated from just 4 notes right?
The lead does well for the piece, this song in my opinion is far sadder in nature then "WhenAngelsCry" due to it's somewhat repetitive nature and the melody itself is much sadder.
have you ever considered putting in some rain sfx? It may have made the song more emotional.
In any case, great work IamMark, i'd like to invite you to check out my work sometime. Keep up the good fight and keep them coming! Take it easy.
Well, I will have to return the favor, but I am pretty bad at reviewing songs. I are a movie buff =)
Rain sfx eh? never thought about that one. I'll have to look into it. And yes you are right, 4 notes started it all. It actually started off as a techno song to tell you the truth and then I found that pad and changed everything over to match it. The results actually gave me one helluva learning experience. If you noticed, right after I did this one, that was actually when I started getting a LOT more complex. but yet still a bit repetative...i think its writers block.
But thanks for another review.
Such a sad song with such an emo name. It was very good a little repetitive but still overall very good. It didnt change barely at all through the whole song which made it get kind of anoying. But still a phenominal song overall so you deserve my 5.
Hey thanks, I am still new at this and am really working on making the sequences less predictable. But I am still having a little bit of a hard time changing stuff up without completely leaving the original melody. But I learned a couple new things making the lead on this one that should help out a lot on future songs. Thanks for the review.