So music wasn´t fun when you started? Well, gongrats on having it fun, then. Really. Hmmm.... I think it was a bit too loud in the beginning, and the nit turned out that it was me who had to turn the volume down! XD Shame on me.
Okay the shakers were a nice addition, too bad the yadded narly nothing to the song. Don´t keep the drums for later songs, they should be use here and now!
Boom tchik-cka boom bang prr-tz drr!
I don´t know, it´s not a too long song, neither is it very filled, I think you could have another synth instead of that synth you provided in the beginning, like a whatever, really, that is not so sharp. I´d prefer a synth lead in it. Or maybe a trancelead? Even a flute would work.
It doesn´t loop particulary well, it seems like it´s supposed to, but it just turns out being kinda cheesy.
You have a low self-esteem when it comes to music, eh?
Actually you´re not that bad. You seem to have talent, but just need some more skill, and you´re gonna be one great artist, really.