I really like the atmosphere at the beginning. It seems calming yet unsettling. It's really unique how you managed to do that. Although the claps starting at :46 completely shatter said tension. Oh well. There's nothing wrong with claps, but you don't put them into ambience tracks. You just don't.
The transition leading up to it is weird, but the part at 1:10 sounds really nice. Except for the claps, of course.
The instrument at 1:25 is off-key and it's really bugging me. Please fix ;A;
The part at 1:41 also sounds nice. It's calming and otherworldly. Then the off-key track comes in at 1:56 and ruins everything. IT DOESN'T EVEN HARMONIZE WITH THE SONG GOSH DANG IT MAN
I swear that one track and those claps absolutely destroy the entire feel of the song. It makes me upset, because I like the rest of this song, but those two things are holding it back. And I mean 1.5-star-loss holding it back. If you were to fix those, this song would be a perfect 5. Until then, though... :(
dangit i was so close
guess it's kinda late to fix those now
maybe ill revisit the song later in a v2 or something
It has a feel to it, which is especially good when it's made for a game. The drums were done pretty interestingly. 1:30 ish it got almost a little too crowded in my opinion. But the song it has a good uniqueness to it that I like. I was scared when I read off tune, cause some people wayyyy overdue and it just, well, makes my ears bleed. This did not do that nearly as much.
Thanks! I tried to make sure the offtune stuff wasn't painful to listen to or anything. Thanks for your feedback!