~Fallen Dunes~ (Mharadium & Negativity OST)

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Finally back with my first Year 2 track!

Okay, so this one's a bit strange. It was written for Mharadium and Negativity's OST, which is a bit strange in itself. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to spoil what this is for or not, so I won't! I'll just say the cover art has something to do with it. ;) I wanted to do a really strange track anyway. It has these offtune notes, weird drums and instruments, and a kind of awkward ending (sorry about that. It was meant to loop ingame). Despite all that, this is one of my favorite tracks that I've made.

I guess that's that. Thanks for listening! I have a wide variety of music coming out this year, so stay tuned!

Cover art by Hello the Terrarian. Her art is amazing! Go check it out: hello-the-terrarian.deviantart.com/


I really like the atmosphere at the beginning. It seems calming yet unsettling. It's really unique how you managed to do that. Although the claps starting at :46 completely shatter said tension. Oh well. There's nothing wrong with claps, but you don't put them into ambience tracks. You just don't.

The transition leading up to it is weird, but the part at 1:10 sounds really nice. Except for the claps, of course.

The instrument at 1:25 is off-key and it's really bugging me. Please fix ;A;

The part at 1:41 also sounds nice. It's calming and otherworldly. Then the off-key track comes in at 1:56 and ruins everything. IT DOESN'T EVEN HARMONIZE WITH THE SONG GOSH DANG IT MAN

I swear that one track and those claps absolutely destroy the entire feel of the song. It makes me upset, because I like the rest of this song, but those two things are holding it back. And I mean 1.5-star-loss holding it back. If you were to fix those, this song would be a perfect 5. Until then, though... :(


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Evilgrapez responds:

dangit i was so close

guess it's kinda late to fix those now

maybe ill revisit the song later in a v2 or something

It has a feel to it, which is especially good when it's made for a game. The drums were done pretty interestingly. 1:30 ish it got almost a little too crowded in my opinion. But the song it has a good uniqueness to it that I like. I was scared when I read off tune, cause some people wayyyy overdue and it just, well, makes my ears bleed. This did not do that nearly as much.

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Evilgrapez responds:

Thanks! I tried to make sure the offtune stuff wasn't painful to listen to or anything. Thanks for your feedback!

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4.82 / 5.00

May 14, 2016
12:12 PM EDT
File Info
6.9 MB
2 min 58 sec

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