Im not into this stuff but still
Thanks again for feedback ICreeper.
Lacks any stability. If you want it to be graded as a musical experiment you should express that that is what it is. As a song I'd have to say it needs to have at least a little bit of consistency. It just went everywhere, and at 1:20 a loop that was really choppy started. Just a lot that needs to be touched up and just stitched together.
Thank you for your constructive criticism I rushed this out and the computer that I was using at the time didn't have good audio but I will keep that in mind when I edit it later. I really appreciate true criticism.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.