0:00 - 0:34 Kinda boring honestly. Not much happening here.
0:35 - 1:06 Really nice sounds here. I love the peacefulness of it, but it does get boring after a while.
1:07 - 1:40 Drum beat really adds something here, but it feels like it clashes with the tranquil melody of the section
1:41 - 2:14 Nice escalation, still soothing, but some variety, and a little buildup which sounds awesome.
2:15 - 2:30 Still soothing, like the whole atmosphere of the song. I like the instruments, too.
2:31 - 3:21 Feels like a bit of a buildup, but just ends up dragging on, which is really annoying to me as a dubstep fan. I do like that thing fading in and out, though.
3:22 - 3:53 This time the percussion really compliments it, and the melody is great with the drums to sort of guide it.
3:54 - 4:27 I love the new instrument here, adds variety and excitement while still keeping the calm atmosphere.
4:28 - 5:27 Nice lower here, I like how it tapers off to the end.
Overall - Nice and peaceful song, but I think the melody needed some more purpose in it, and some development. And careful where you put your drums. They can, if used in the wrong place at the wrong volume, kill the chill atmosphere of a song like this. 8.5/10
Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words man :)
It's nice to finally see a review that I can really benefit from. I completely agree with you on all of those comments listening back to it.
Again, thank you for going out of your way to leave a review, it helps a lot and I appreciate it :D
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