Not bad, is something repetitive (FUN FACT!) But, i think you can improve your skillz you understand me? Not be sad! is a really cool piece :)
Im not sad xD Thank you :)
The build-up could use some work. It really hurts my ears around 30 seconds in where I expect the drop to hit, but it does not (it comes a couple seconds after instead). And you're right, it's very repetitive, so please consider lots of variety for the genre you're approaching. Think of the modern pop song format: intro, chorus, bridge, chorus, bridge, outro. That scheme can apply to most sub-genres of EDM. Keep it up, though. ;)
Thanks for review man! I will fix all problems in this song :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.