ur stuff aint on key, and u need to work on transitions, and not to over do things.and make ur song longer, make it on beat
(( Could Be louder ))
This was ok, but seems really slow and could be louder somewhat, also add the sounds closer to gether if you can, anyways it was some nice effort.
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Could be louder along with a few more added things
I had a feelin that it needed to be too, ight man thanks for the help, preciate it.
~)(~ Stay Flossin.