Not bad, not bad at all. I could easily see this being used in a small intro/tutorial level for a game.
My suggestion for you: The kicks do sound a tad generic. Your snares are great, but the kicks could pass for something slightly stock sound-ish. It's something even I struggle with now and then.
I'd also love more variety throughout the track as well. It's great as is, but that extra jolt of variation in there could bring it to the next level. (No pun intended.)
I can see this having a bunch of potential., even more so if you ever decide to work on this some more. Good stuff!
Thanks for the review! I'll definitely work on the kick sounds, this is just a demo so there's always room for improvement. <(^.^<)
Sounds really game-y! Could be a teeny bit louder, but besides that, sounds like dungeon music of some sort :P
I'm for sure going to work on the volume of the track at some point. Thanks for the review! m(^.^)m
Should this be video game music? Sorry, but in my opinion it sounds terrible :/ random melody pluck with to much delay and a random 8-bit sound at 0:55 :o I just don't like random sounds mixed together (only when you're Dr. Dre. but i don't think you are him)
I said video game inspired. It's not a random melody pluck since I played the actual melody. There are no random sounds as they are all in key together. Thanks for reviewing anyway! ;^P ~~*