3 minutes of the same progression, there is no evolution to the overall song. It sounds more like a pop song where the focus should be on a vocal performer and not the music. The theme is set and never really goes anywhere. I like how you wrapped the song up though within the last 5 seconds.
Thanks for this review :) I just couldn't find somebody to do the vocals on this song :/
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