I personally think the bass at 0.17s should have some delay effect. That would be cool. :D
and you can add some stutter effect on the speech as well. or at least make the last word 'function' delay, so it will goes like "Function...function....function..........." :D
That is all from me. :D I am no music expert, but I really think these effects could have boost your music so much. Overall, this is a decent music production. I'd give 4 stars. :D
#found you music from review thread#
Thanks for your feedback :) I agree with what you've said and have changed some things and have uploaded a new version which I hope is an improvement along the lines of what you suggested! Let me know what you think!