It does have a nice retro alien game sound to it. I can picture this being a good soundtrack to a hop and bop platformer type game.
Like MysteriousPresence said, it does need more melodies to it. The song gets very monotonous. I also agree that it took way too long for a good melody to build up.
I think you just need to get comfortable experimenting with a bunch of different sounds for one song. it seems like your biggest issue with making songs is making sure that they don't get so repetitive.
Just keep on improving!
The title doesn't really fit ! X)
This is what this music needs. To be honest, the melody that started at 01:36 was nice, but why does it start at 01:36 ? I mean there's a huuuge build up, way to huuuge ! Huuuge. Huuuge. HUUUUUGE !!! And there's no variation !
Okay okay, so what's the thing ? In fact, you really need to add more melodies and more variations around your main melody ! Remember : no melody for too long = boring !
It's unfortunate because I really think the main melody is cool !
There's a good work on the instruments, the drums are really good and it's really orgasmic when sounds are responding to each other like at 0:59 (nice unusual drop by the way) !
Well the problem is as there is not much of a melody, it completely destroys the personality of the music ! I can't say "this music is original because there is not a true melody" ! :/
Melodies : 1/2
Instruments : 2/2
Personality : 0/1
In overall, please work on the melodies. Do more true melodies in one track, more variations, and not big silence of 1,5 minutes ! X)
There's potential in you, I felt it ! =3