Nice bassline, mixing is defo the issue here.
Since you put it under ambient I won't criticize it on being 'repetitive' since this is more on the atmosphere.
What is a legit gripe with this track as Deftone puts it, the high pitch really destroys it.
Now I do disagree with him on it not fitting and more it just being mixed a bit poorly.
Just put a high-pass filter on the snares and fills and it will definitely help your song alot more.
Really solid track. A little bit repetitive, but you still have something really cool here. Mess around with some mixer effects and see what you can do to change things up a little. Also consider adding some other sounds in there to change the track up a bit.
Cheers for giving this a look, and thanks for the feedback! It's an old song, I've tried to carry those lessons forward in my newer stuff, but I might go back one day and remake this.
It has a really nice, chill vibe to it. However, I don't really like the beat. It sounds a little too high pitched and doesn't sound very pleasant to my ears.
Also, it gets too repetitive. If you were to change up the beat a few times over the course of the song it would make it sound not so unvaried.
This one's part of a series of what are supposed to be instrumentals (For rappers and stuff, yeah I know, it's weird, allow me) so I'm not bothered about the repetitiveness.
The beat bit does interest me though, since the few other people I've had listen to it haven't mentioned it. I have remastered this one about seven times so it wouldn't surprise me if it needed redoing again. Thanks for listening!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.