1:35 - Too many instruments. Way too many.
It's definitely a video game tune, the screeches are too often used and it's kinda really unspecial. It has potential but atm it's pretty awkward 'cos of this repeating of actually everything. There's nothing special in that track.
Use your imagination, let your creativity flow. You'll find something cool to put it in that tune.
Carry on practicing! You'll get better :)
It definitely sounds more like video game music than anything else. I can picture it being the soundtrack for a game that has something to do with scientists and laboratories. It has a mad scientist vibe to it.
It's not a bad song whatsoever, but it does kind of get annoying. The sound that sounds like screeching is what kind of makes it hard to listen to after a little bit. I think cutting down on that sound would improve this song.
Yeah, I think you might be right about the saw thing. When you say cut down, do you mean solely volume-wise or smoothing the edge the sound has?
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