Compliments: I really liked this song! I think it had an interesting melody and sounds, while mixing them gave a very cool effect.
Criticism: I felt a little too much repetition, and it would have helped if there had been more clear variants. Personally I didn't like the decay sound at the end of each note in some parts, but it's just my personal opinion, I don't know about others.
Overall I thought it was a solid good song and great considering it's out of your comfort zone.
thanks for the feedback man, it's always nice to hear other opinions