at times a little messy, but i like it like that.
I love the stop-start rhythm of the beat. The intro was a little long IMO (as I see it, it basically lasts for the first minute). The drop at 1:12 was catchy and cool, if a little underwhelming. It got better as it got more melodic at around 1:30. I love how reverberant this track is, though. I loved the transition with the low, robotic-sounding vocals at 2:07, which then flowed into the bass-y bridge at 2:15 really well. However, then I thought you made it really randomly atmospheric and furtive at 2:35. It was a bit of a jarring mood change, especially since the atmospheric, tranquil section lasts for a full 90 seconds. This piece is definitely more minimalistic at times than most of your other works. I personally just think you tried to tie together a few too many contrasting themes here. The production quality and instrumentation are, again, very good. Usually with your short pieces you don't have any issues with coherence, but you could stand to this piece a little more carefully IMO. Overall good work! ;)
I didn't like this song at first, but after listening to it a couple of times, one of my favorites!
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