-=First Day of Life=-

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well i worked hard on it, its one of my unfinished songs that i finished today plz Review


me again.

as opposed to softening the timpani dramatically, maybe lower the pitch it to kettle drum level as wel as soften it and give some power to the piece. That would sound nicer but in turn, would go somewhat against your theme. all in all it was an enjoyable piece.


I like the piece, but i have a few problems with it. The Timpani really does sound pretty bad. But, the rest of the piece is quite nice. The feeling this piece gave me was more of an young child, rather than the first day of life. The music was a bit too hectic and curious for the first day of life.

Other than that, i would put in a softer part in the middle where everything goes calm, then, you have it swell up to the climax. It always sounds better that way. Good job overall.


Zajedx responds:

thanks for the helpful review
yup the timpani is bad :/ well im kinda new to this genre, i have to EQ different then in hip hop
but im gettin better

hmm yeah its a bit too hectic
but hey I am a hectic person^^

im glad you liked it

really thanks alot

Nice work Zajed

Hey Zajedx :)

Thought I'd stop by and give you a review :)

this is quite an interesting piece you have here! I really like the instrument selection and the melodies you have in this, my only improvement to this would be to the percussional aspects in the first half it sounds kinda out of place, more rather the sounds you used more than anything, had you of changed them to somethine else they would have fitted better to the piece.

overall this is a pretty solid piece, the instrumentation was awesome, nice work!


come check by my recent submission, I'd be interested to see what you think of it!

it's called MindSight

Peace Out!


Zajedx responds:

im glad you stopped by my name

im kinda new to this genre, but im gettin better

i just started a new piece and i hope i do better at this

well its 5 am here have to go to school in 30 minutes

so im kinda busy
i check you out whem im home

thanks alot for th review

and excuse my bad english^^ i hope i spelled everything right

thanks alot

good man

I like the song and what the insturments consist of. Although, I did not like the Timpani or what ever you used as the drums when they get kinda loud. I think it was a timpani though. At the end when all the insturments play their last long note, the timpiani sounds awful once again...maybe tune that down or something. Good job none the less.


Come check my audio out, even though I do techno. I would love to have a review!

Zajedx responds:

thanks for taking time to review my work

yup its a timpani hmm your right its a bit loud, but i couldnt change it for some reason i dont know why

anyway i know what i have to do necxt time

thanks alot

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3.35 / 5.00

Dec 4, 2006
12:17 PM EST
File Info
3.4 MB
3 min 41 sec

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