Interesting.
The sounds you use for your melodies are pleasing to the ear, but some of them tend to run together. Also, the melodies are really varied, but you don't want to go too far out or people won't be able to remember them. The bass seems to kinda interrupt the melody, but I'd be a hypocrite if I elaborated on that. Also, you don't have to make your harmonies play notes exactly as your melodies do, it sounds tedious when that happens.
You're making progress, more so than I, but there are still elements of the song that could be tweaked on.
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I honestly don't know what this is, but it is strange in that the kicks are in 4/4, while everything else is in 3/4. Feel free to use it in anything, just please credit.
SI-7 responds:
I can't stand sounds that hurt my ears when trying to make something, since I have to listen to it over and over. I can see how it's muddled together. This was back when I just used my samples/plugins in a ton of diff baselines for everything, including the variations in the melody. No automation tracks or anything.. I used 15 different baselines for this track.
I haven't practiced making music in awhile, primarily because I got sick of trying to figure out how to work with the samples and stuff I had... with the exception of ZynAddSubFX, which is so complex I can't figure out hardly how to use it, and don't want to spend a few hundred hours learning it, so I just figured out how to get samples from the internet into my DAW. That was awhile after this, this is from back when I was still learning how to do reverb.
What can I say, this is a really decent track. I mean, What you're showing here is that you know your ways when it comes to music, and I think you should make more!
The track is pretty repetitive though, but I love the part that starts at 01:30.
I think you deserve a chance. Welcome to the game buddy, looking forward to hear more from ya ~
SI-7 responds:
Thanks! I do know this is quite a bit repetitive, and I wish I'd thought more about that while composing this. Oh well, at least it doesn't sound terrible. ^-^
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