I loved it!
I loved the first part of this song, it's just after the 1st minute, it sort of lost it's feel as to what it should've been and scout is right, needed just a few more instuments.
There weren't anly problems in my book, I guess you could've upped (is that even a word?) the tempo a bit, but apart from that, I though it deserved a 5!
kinda late response but now that I listen to it again and over and over again maybe something else could be done to the transition "it was a nightmare" part...
it starts off pretty good. kinda slow start off though. I recommend more songs in the background to give it a true ambient feel. It's still good. :)
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