I like the chord prog (although it is overused in other songs). It would be better if you made the third (out of four) bars in the bass an octave lower. (the C would be an octave lower.) Also some of the instruments lack depth, such as the melody at 1:22.
Pretty good though.
you're getting better at this, keep it up!
wow i rally love this song i've listened to it so many times havent got bored, i've even sent it to all my friends too. you've done a really good job!!!
thanks! haha i didnt even think of making a myspace for my music
Real good for where you at.
This is really good, especially considering your only starting. I think its just gravey.
your gravey as well, chris :D
finally you made a song worth listening! jk jk. ily.
this is very good though. 5/5. like the 3xosc like a crazy man!
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