I don't usually leave descriptive reviews like this, so it definitely goes to show I want to help. First off, your main problem with dubstep is your build-ups are really good but the drops aren't as great. The first drop didn't show much of a percussion until 1:22. Just a couple steps scattered around. Not that I'm saying every drop has a percussion but it is something to experiment with. The wobble noise was weird, and while dubstep does contain weird noises it could be revolutionized a bit more. Lastly the noise at 4:08 seemed unfit. Not knowing how new you are to audio making, it's okay to not be perfect on your first tries. The dubstep artists I listen to have years of practice and experience, even their first songs weren't the best compared to now. So don't give up, because if you continue to study and play around you can really go places. Everyone gets better each new thing they create. This was better than Jungle War. It captured a theme, and the later drops were better. For the next one you make it wouldn't hurt to play around with filters a little, since I didn't notice any in either track. There's also some drum and synth samples for dubstep as well. Send me a pm and maybe I can help. Overall, I do think you have potential. Also, was I supposed to hear 'sh*t' at 1:08? lol
Thanks for your review, This is my 2nd Dubstep song ever, so yeah, I need to learn a lot more. And yes there's a 'sh*t' at 1:08 :D Just some change... In the third drop you can hear that part how it was before I changed it to this.
I can tell that you put a huge amount of effort into this song. I would check some of the chords you use. I don't know if it is your chords or if it is the pitch bend in the lead synth, but it needs to be fixed. The actual bass used was rather good for dubstep. It did get a little awkward when the bass note had ended and you were left with this high pitched wobble of a note. I would like to mention that dubstep isn't exactly my cup of tea, so I know I can't rate this properly without being biased. So, because I know I am biased, I will give you a 4/5
thanks for your opinion, idk what you mean with the lead synth, you mean the 3rd part? That is actually a wobble, so yeah it sounds kinda weird, but dubstep uses all sorts of weird sounds, so i thought this would fit.
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