I love the dynamic between the electronic and heavy guitar-based elements of the piece. While it's probably irrelevant to the show you wrote this for, the ending seems a bit rushed and it doesn't appear to loop well. The mixing and mastering is solid, though. Maybe I'm used to a bit more kick, but that might not be appropriate for this genre. This is a fun, engaging, full-textured piece. Nice work! ;)
The transition between the different parts isn't very good, and the ending should have a small tune to it just to end it like at eddsworld's theme ending it has a little tune.
Thanks! Yeah, the transitions are a little abrupt but it was written to time directly to action on screen and there was very little wiggle room. With this tempo I ended up having to lop a few beats off of one phrase and then I had like 3 and a half bars to fit a B section before the recapitulation. I tried to obscure the timing by shifting into a hemiola pattern which blurred the downbeat so it eventually felt like it was in 3 so when I went back into 4/4 it wasn't as obvious that I had dropped a few beats. Meanwhile I was jockeying the tempo the entire time to get everything to match the onscreen cuts.
Do you have any specific suggestions of how I could go about making the transitions more seamless without changing the tempo map?