He he, not bad for a kid. Man, you really 13? Anyways, this sounds fine, well structured, some sounds are kind of not fitting in, and usually that's what I like, especially if it isn't disturbing the overall composition. Well done. You might as well check out my "Travelling Through Space", the clean version I guess. Keep it up.
Thanks, but this was accually just Peace On The Midnight Sun. I uploaded the wrong one... Sorry about that.