I think if you layered some of your instruments with some thicker/deeper tones, you might get a song that you feel is less "mediocre" sounding. Or try slightly more variation on some patterns, make the high pitched piano dance a little differently, although I really like the way it wobbles out into the background. I really love the rattly sound effects here, and I think over all the track is very solid.
I want to hear one that you don't think is mediocre though ;)
Well when I was making this I was actually just intending it to be an 8-bar loop, but then I just kept expanding it for some reason. I agree on the problem of variation in this, I actually got annoyed listening to it over and over as I was making it, haha. I thought it wouldn't be that bad in one sitting, obviously when I'm working on it I hear it over and over again a hundred times.
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