Lots of this isn't really my kind of thing. Like... I like hard dance music, just not a full minute of it. Maybe add an arp in the background to keep people interested. However, in the second half, it really catches my attention. There are some REALLY nice instruments and melodies used. Keep it up! I'll gladly stick around for more of your songs :)
Those are some interesting sounds. This really only started getting more musical around the 2:05 mark. I love the way it builds up from thereon. The first bit felt more like a noise experimental or something (after the first 10 seconds). The other thing I quite enjoy are the kicks, because they're not particularly aggressive so they don't wear out on me when they constantly pound each beat.
I'll be honest - this is the type of music that doesn't particularly appeal to me, but I still think there are good parts to this - the buildup which I mentioned earlier. I guess, I feel like it needed to be more focused musically and less dependent on sound effects, which are cool, but felt like they weren't varied enough to be interesting.
I feel you really need to listen to more Hard Dance music before you can really get an idea of it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.