You need a hook bro.
Yeah I know, lyrical hooks are used in vocal songs but PRINCIPAL it's the same just for melody.
Good work. Keep on workin'!
I'll read that someday prodably.
Yeah, similar to that other guy's comment. Sidechain the synths, especially the bass, to the kick so that it stands out more. Sometimes I like to put a sine wave w/ moderate reverb & hella width to give my kicks extra 'presence'.
Similiar to the reply to the other guy's comment
Beginning starts off pretty good. The progression is alright. After 30-40 seconds it just goes downhill. I don't feel the punch. It lacks melody, not that is doesn't have one, but it's not memorable. The mastering could be slightly improved; needs stronger drums and more instruments. It sounds like everything is panned and nothing is left in the centre. There's also way too much reverb at 2:10. I like the actual sound of it, such as the bass and the lead synths, but there's much room for improvement.
I have to admit, that I didn't put as much effort in this, as I usually do in my songs and I somehow knew it's not that good, but I felt like I want to publish that track anyways, now I prodably wouldn't do that.
Anyway, the advices are always appreciated, so thanks!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.