Here is my full out review.
0:00 to 00:30
[-] The mixing is pretty good.
[-] The very close to ambient sound is very nice.
00:30 to 1:30
[-] The jump to the very punchy synth to rather muffled was awkward
[-] The mixing is still very good. I really like the drum choices.
[-] It is nice that there are people on NG that still use a melody bass at the same time
1:30 to 2:00
[-] Very smooth transition.
[-] I love this clean synth. This section was very well done.
[-] The drum choice was perfect
2:00 to 2:30
[-] I like all the synth choices that you have
[-] I personally don't like how you made the octave go higher with the main synth. Just keep the (Subbass?) going up the octave.
[-] Still some pretty strong drumds. But maybe use multiple drums leading to the drop
2:30 to 3:00
[-] NO! The drop had so much going for it! It felt like you were on the right floor but the jumped out the window (Translation into real English: It had so much going for it, but then it sounded like it failed.)
[-] Although the mixing was good, it wasn't good enough for the drop.
3:00 to 3:43
[-] The mixing was [once again,] good. But it didn't have that feel-good vibe at the end like most songs do. Trust me, I have the same exact problem. It is hard to have a song that makes you "feel-good." But if you want your mixing to be mind- blowing, it must have this feeling.
[-] I could feel the EnV inspiration.
[-] It was a pretty good song. You have demonstrated a good knowledge of music.
[-] I just think that there are a few things that could use some tweaking.
3.5/ 5 stars
(I hope you find my rating fair)
Wow, thanks for the detailed review :)
Some of the synths are a little tiring, and the melody is relatively simple, but I quite like the break section. The lead seems to dominate the higher end of the spectrum, leaving the middle kinda empty. The pad is a nice touch, but it doesn't do much for the lack of solid mids.
With a little more mid presence, and a little polishing, this could be a relatively good track. Pretty well done.
Amazing melody, and overall a good song.
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