I'm giving you 3 1/2 stars because I feel like you knew what you were doing by having those lyrics for this song. I assume you meant for this song to be a parody and not make sense by using words common and often used Japanese phrases. I found the song to be extremely funny because I can see this song being used as an intro in an "animation/ fanimation making fun of anime" type of show. I might be correct by making such a bold assumption or I could be reaching too far and giving this song too much credit but bottom line, I found comedy in this and I enjoyed it and others shouldn't take it Too seriously. Good Job.
Seriously? Do you know the actual translation? here's the first part: Let's eat! Thank you! You Idiot! Big brother! Thank you! Sorry!
When you want to make a song with a text, make it have some sense when translated.
You're just a classy guy (guys, maybe idk) watching anime. Study a little bit.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.